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Saturday, 20 September 2014

How to finish that manuscript – advice for aspiring authors

Another one bites the dust!

Often, the biggest challenge for anyone who dreams of becoming an author – is actually finishing that damn manuscript!

I have been writing for years now. However, the first decade was filled with drawers of half-finished stories. My classic pattern was to reach page 100 and then throw away the bloody thing in disgust. Either, I’d just discovered the story wasn’t working, or it was boring me to death. Whatever the reason, I had just spent a couple of months on a story that I would never finish – again. Fast forward a few years and I have self-published one epic fantasy novella and three full-length novels, as well as a Lord of the Rings fan fiction series. I have also written a number of non-fiction works, and fiction novels under pen names. 

These days I rarely begin novels that I never finish.

Some hints to make sure you finish that manuscript

I could come up with a detailed list of all ways to ensure you get that story written – but in the end it boils down to three key pieces of advice:

Write what you love: I write the stories I have always wanted to read. I throw myself into epic adventures that have me clamouring to return to them. I have to keep writing because I have to know what happens! This advice might seem like a no-brainer but so many of us start out writing the novels we think we ‘should’ write. Is it any wonder then, that we can’t stand the sight of it after a couple of months? Writing a story you love is hard enough, don’t throw rocks in your path by trying to write anything else.

Plan it: I’m not saying you have to sit down and plan the story out in meticulous detail – you’re likely to get bored half-way if you do. However, a story outline and a rough chapter plan, will help ensure that a) the story actually works and b) you think about important elements like structure, pacing and characters. If you’re embarking on an epic fantasy, make sure you do some serious world-building before you write, including summaries of the magic system and a potted history of the world your characters inhabit.Otherwise your story will lack credibility and depth. If you don't believe in the world you've created, no one else will.

Approach it as a professional: If you’re serious about writing, then act as if it is a job. Once you self-publish and list that book on Amazon (or any other self-publishing platform), then you are officially ‘in business’. Self-publishing was a huge motivation for me to finish my novels. Once you approaching your writing as a professional, your entire relationship with it changes. Suddenly, it isn’t such a slog. You find yourself scheduling time, setting milestones and treating your writing with the seriousness it deserves.

Get over the idea of the ‘tortured artist’ stereotype. You know, the guy who stares blankly at his laptop screen, waiting for inspiration to strike, for his muse to whisper in his ear. That guy could be waiting a long time... 

The act of creation is not some elusive power that only the select few master. You can have all the talent in the world, but if you don’t actually finish anything, who will care? Write the kind of books you crave to read, plan before you throw yourself in, and treat it as a profession - and you will have that manuscript written in no time!

Sunday, 27 July 2014

DEEP-SPIRE Kindle giveaway!



DEEP-SPIRE is currently free on Amazon, for just two days (26-27 July).

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Monday, 23 June 2014

DEEP-SPIRE is about to launch...

After months of hard work, DEEP-SPIRE (the prequel novella to the Palâdnith Chronicles) is very close to publication! For those of you who have been awaiting its release, here is the Prologue from the novella. Watch this space for more details on when DEEP-SPIRE will be available on Amazon.



“Only the dead have seen the end of war.”
― Plato

We guide the hearts, heads and hands of those who rule, but do not covet such power for ourselves.
― Sentorân creed




Prologue

A Mid-winter’s Dawn

Deep-Spire, Central Omagen


It was a bleak day to die.
The cold air bit hard against skin and penetrated deep into the bone, even through layers of clothing. A freezing mist hung over the land and the stillness, except for the lonely cry of a raven, was absolute.
Belythna Arran watched her breath billow like steam as she exhaled. Then, she cast one last glance back at Deep-Spire, shadowed in mist. Two delicate, notched spires outlined against the grey sky, appeared like twin mountain peaks, one dwarfing the other, framed by the skeleton limbs of black trees.
My home. My prison.
She turned away from the fortress and focused her attention on those surrounding her – one hundred and fifty men and women dressed in black: black tunics, leggings, calf-length leather boots, and thick hooded cloaks. The only splashes of colour were the gold circlets about their necks. Around their waists, some of her companions carried swords. Belythna was not one of them – her skills lay elsewhere.
At the back of the group trailed a band of around twenty figures cloaked in grey. These were the apprentices; the youngest was barely thirteen years old. The apprentices should have been spared. It pained Belythna to see the terror on their faces; the same fear she felt but hid from sight. It would have been better to have sent them away, to have kept them safe – but Lady Serina would not have it.
Belythna’s gaze travelled to where their leader stood at the front of the group. Lady Serina stood ramrod straight, her gaze scanning the mist before them, her strong face impassive. She was waiting – they all were.
Where were they?
They would come. Belythna had no doubt of that. They would have seen the Sentorân empty out of Deep-Spire, ready to do battle. Riadamor was just biding her time.
Belythna inhaled deeply and tried to calm her roiling stomach. This felt wrong, all of it; her palms were slippery and she felt nauseous.
Still, the enemy did not emerge from the mist. The Sentorân waited with the silence of a mid-winter’s morning echoing around them. Winter was cold here, in the depths of Central Omagen, far from the mild coast. The land had gone into hibernation. Belythna’s fingers were turning numb and her feet ached from the chill. She stamped them in an effort to restore the circulation. If Riadamor did not make an appearance soon they would all be too stiff to move.
Belythna glanced once more at Lady Serina, searching for any sign that their leader was losing her nerve. The woman’s face had gone hard. She had grown so still that Belythna could barely notice the rise and fall of her chest. She was summoning her powers, and Belythna looked away, knowing she should do the same.
She closed her eyes and struggled to slow down her breathing. It was an effort to clear her mind and summon her flame – a slender column of silver – that would calm her thoughts and channel her talent. Her thoughts tangled themselves in knots and she struggled to unravel them.
It took brute-force, but, eventually, Belythna managed to reach the place where nothing in the world existing but the flickering flame before her. For what was to come she would need to reach deep. Using her abilities in this way would hurt; it would rub her soul raw.
The flame guttered, threatening to go out as Belythna’s fear resurfaced.
This is wrong – it can only end badly.
Beside her, she heard a hiss from Serina – a warning. When Belythna tore her attention back to the swirling mist before them, she realised why.
The Esquill approached; shadowy figures gliding towards the waiting Sentorân.
Belythna watched them draw near. They were many; at least three times the Sentorân’s number. How had Riadamor managed to find and train so many sorcerers so quickly? No wonder they had begun to make their presence felt all over the five realms. In just a few years, Riadamor had worked the impossible. She was more powerful than any of them. They had all underestimated her from the beginning.
Now it had come to this – two armies of sorcerers facing each other across a misty field on a mid-winter’s morning.
One of the figures stepped forward from the ranks. She was dressed in grey; a tall, slim woman with a plain face and lank blonde hair.
Belythna’s gaze fixed upon the woman’s face. She had not seen Riadamor in seven years, and life in the interim had not been kind to her. Gathering and training her followers had drained her. She looked older than her thirty years; her face was haggard and pale. Yet her eyes, dark pools, were luminous and ageless. This was not the Riadamor she had known at Deep-Spire. Before her stood a stranger, a terrifying one.
Were we ever friends?
Seeing Riadamor’s face once more brought it all back – all the memories of the last seventeen years. They had arrived at Deep-Spire within three days of each other. They had both been thirteen winters old and eager to learn. Both girls had been desperate to cast off their old identities and assume new ones. However, Riadamor had gone further than Belythna – further than any of them.
Belythna remembered the day she had witnessed another side to her friend. It was a day as searing hot, as this one was bone-numbingly cold.
Looking back, the events of that day had been a clear sign of what was to come.

But, who was to know? Her gaze never left Riadamor’s face. We are only wise in hindsight – even if it means the ruin of us all.

Sunday, 25 May 2014

How writing fan fiction improved my writing!

I started writing THE WITCH OF ANGMAR (Shortlisted for this year's Julius Vogel Awards - fan fiction category!) mainly for fun. It was a way to get in touch with other Tolkien fans and make my own trip back to Middle Earth!

However, as I was writing the story - which took me about a year of fortnightly installments to complete - I noticed something interesting. I was finding it much easier to write about Middle Earth, Rose Fairbairn, Peri Took and Salrean of Farnost than I was about my own fantasy world and characters?

Why?

Because, unlike my own fantasy world (gulp!), I knew Middle Earth pretty damn well. I had read LOTR and the Hobbit enough times to be able to close my eyes and imagine myself there. Thanks to Tolkien, I had a detailed history and rich cultural backdrop to draw upon. With a setting like this, it was easy to write a story that flowed, that felt 'real'.

Lesson learnt, I went back and took a long hard look at my world and characters the epic fantasy series I am working on. 

I realised that although I don't have the time, or inclination, to go to Tolkien's lengths; there were a number of aspects that needed 'fleshing out'. If I didn't know my world's history, culture and topography in detail, how could I expect a reader to believe in it?

To this end, I have written a 'prequel' to the Palâdnith Chronicles (Books One and Two are already published - JOURNEY OF SHADOWS and THE CITADEL OF LIES - and I am currently working on the third book in the series - THE WELL OF SECRETS).

DEEP-SPIRE, is a novella (although a reasonable sized one - at around 35,000 words). It 'sets the scene' for the adventure to come, while drawing the reader into the story of Belythna Arran, a young sorceress, and the mother of our heroes in the Palâdnith Chronicles.

Watch this space for DEEP-SPIRE, as it will be available on Amazon soon.

Writing a prequel was a lot of extra work, but it has worked its magic. Now, as I write the third book in the series, THE WELL OF SECRETS, I can believe that this world, Palâdnith, and everyone in it, truly exist!


Tuesday, 29 April 2014

COMING SOON - DEEP-SPIRE - the prequel novella to the Palâdnith Chronicles

Every series needs a prequel, and the Palâdnith Chronicles is no exception! DEEP-SPIRE takes place around forty years before the first novel in this epic fantasy series, JOURNEY OF SHADOWS.

Read on to find out more... 

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“Only the dead have seen the end of war.” ― Plato

Belythna Arran is a sorceress.

Belythna is one of the Sentorân, an order charged with the protection of Palâdnith – a land that has seen too much blood-shed in its history. She pledged, at the age of thirteen, to dedicate her life to the Sentorân – but as the years pass she begins to realise that the walls of Deep-Spire, the order’s stronghold, have become a prison.

Once, powerful and respected, the order has fallen into stagnation.

The rulers of Paladnith no longer seek their council, and the people view the sorcerers with distrust.

However, the greatest threat to the Sentorân, and everything they stand for, comes from within.

Riadamor, an ambitious young sorceress, rebels against the order. Her act is a catalyst for a series of events that bring the Sentorân to the edge of doom.

Belythna, who entered the order at the same time as Riadamor, struggles to come to terms with a changing world, and her place in it. As Deep-Spire edges towards war, she must decide who she really is, and where her loyalties lie.  

DEEP-SPIRE sets the scene for the first novel in the Palâdnith Chronicles, JOURNEY OF SHADOWS (Shortlisted for the Sir Julius Vogel Awards, 2014). DEEP-SPIRE is a tale of duty, choice and self-discovery.

DEEP-SPIRE will be available soon on Amazon Kindle. Watch this space!

Saturday, 19 April 2014

It's done - THE WITCH OF ANGMAR is now finished!

It has been around a year in the writing - but my Lord of the Rings Fan Fiction series, THE WITCH OF ANGMAR, has now come to an end.

Like many Tolkien fans, I have read The Lord of the Rings numerous times – and each time, without fail, I turn that last page with a tinge of sadness. I never want to leave Middle Earth. As a writer of epic fantasy, I have created my own worlds – and I enjoy weaving stories within them – but my first love will always be Middle Earth. There is a grandeur to Tolkien’s world that few have been able to match, a detailed history that makes us believe that it actually existed. I like to think it did.

 This is my first attempt at fan fiction, and one I embarked upon so that I could go back to Middle Earth and take a long holiday there. I had great fun writing The Witch of Angmar, and have tried to be as true to Tolkien’s world as possible – while throwing in a few elements of my own.
Here’s what it’s about:
Over two hundred and twenty years since the destruction of Sauron, and the beginning of the ‘long reign of peace’, evil stirs in Middle Earth once more.
Our tale begins in the Shire and with the celebrations of the one-hundred year anniversary of the passing of the last members of the Fellowship into the West. Rose Fairbairn and Pericles Took – descendants of Samwise Gamgee and Pippin Took – learn that their bloodline could mean their deaths. The sister of the Witch-King of Angmar has awoken from a three thousand year sleep from her cold tomb deep in the Mountains of Angmar. Aided by the goblins of Moria, Morwyn of Angmar rebuilds the fortress of Carn Dûm, and plans her revenge on those who slew her brother.

Follow Rose and Peri’s adventures as they travel north with a female ranger, Salrean, into the lost Realm of Arnor. During their journey they will discover the truth about the new threat to the people of Middle Earth – before they must travel north to face the Witch of Angmar herself.
If you know anyone who loves The Lord of the Rings, and might enjoy this tale, please feel free to share. It's my gift to all the Tolkien fans out there!

LOTR Fan Fiction: The Witch of Angmar - Part #22


The Witch of Angmar

Legacy of the Fellowship

Part Twenty-two

Escape


R
ose lay on her side, her body wracked with pain. Her gaze was fixed upon Morwyn’s slumped body. The witch’s blood pooled on the flagstones where she lay. A few feet back stood a slight figure dressed in tattered leathers.
Azil had slain the Witch of Angmar.
In the end, it had not been a woman, or a hobbit, that had brought about the downfall of the Witch-king’s evil sister – but a goblin.
“Betrayer!” Targkok snarled.
The Goblin King unsheathed his heavy iron sword, strode forward – and skewered Azil on his blade.
Azil sank against the wall, the iron blade that pierced his torso, scraping against the rough stone behind him.
Their gazes met. The Goblin King then leaned closer, his lips curling into a sneer.
“I would never have taken you back,” he spat, twisting the blade deeper to emphasise his words. “This death is too short, too clean for the like of you,” Targkok continued, his eyes gleaming with cruelty.
Azil did not reply, he merely stared up at his king, his thin face contorted.
Helplessly looking on, Rose saw the defiance in Azil’s eyes. A sob welled up within her. Yet, she had not the strength to reach for Sting. Morwyn had hurt her, badly, and she could even not summon the strength to stand.
“Azil!” she cried.
The goblin’s eyes, glazing over now, flicked towards her before returning to the Goblin King. Targkok’s snarling face was just inches from his.
“I don’t regret it,” Azil finally wheezed. “Mine, was not much of an existence anyway.”
“Worm,” Targkok growled back. “I shall cut your snivelling tongue out.”
The Goblin King reached down to the knife he wore strapped to his thigh. However, he was interrupted from making good on his threat by the crash of something heavy colliding with the doors to the chamber.
Those inside the Witch Tower’s chamber turned their head towards the sound.
The doors flew open and slammed back against the wall – and the bodies of the two orc guards collapsed in the doorway. Behind them stood the outlines of four men. They wore dark green cloaks, fastened at the throat with six-pointed star clasps.
Rose stared at them, hearing Peri’s indrawn gasp of shock behind her.
Rangers.
The man at the front of the group pushed back his hood.
Ethorn of Farnost scanned the scene before him. When he saw Salrean’s crumpled form at the end of the chamber, his dark gaze narrowed and his mouth thinned.
In his right hand, Ethorn wielded a magnificent sword with a long blade. His gaze fastened upon the Goblin King, who had released Azil, and turned to meet the newcomers. Then, Ethorn raised his sword high before him, grasping its hilt with two hands in a silent salute.
“This ends now,” his voice rang out across the chamber.
The four rangers, their travel-stained cloaks billowing behind them, leapt forward. The goblins, who had been holding Peri fast, released him and drew their weapons. They met the Rangers, their screeches and howls deafening in the confined space.
Targkok roared and hurtled across the chamber towards Ethorn. Their blades met with a harsh clang that echoed high into the vaulted roof.
Finally free, Peri scurried across the floor to where Rose lay. He tried to help her to her feet but she shook her head, her face streaked with tears.
“I can’t,” she gasped. “Peri, take Sting and use it!”
Peri, his face pale and strained, nodded wordlessly. Then, he reached for the elf-blade that lay in the scabbard at Rose’s side. He withdrew Sting – its blade glowing bright blue – and turned to join the fight. Rose saw the fierce determination on his face, and felt a rush of pride, of affection, for him. He was brave – and she had always known it.
A moment later, Peri engaged a goblin guard who rushed at him with a swinging mace. He stuck his attacker in the throat with the blade before swivelling to meet another goblin who had come to its companion’s aid – too late.
Rose curled up on her side, watching the fight through half-closed lids. Pain gripped her chest with every breath. What had Morwyn done to her? Her insides burned.
She was vaguely aware of more goblins flooding into the chamber. Yet, the rangers cut them down, one by one, with deadly efficiency. She saw Ethorn wound Targkok; saw the mighty Goblin King crumple, only to be dragged, still bellowing, from the chamber by his servants.
The battle raged inside the Witch Tower – a violent storm that left devastation in its wake. Dead goblins littered the ground. Groans filled the chamber from those few who lay dying. Rose saw Ethorn cut down his last adversary before striding across to where Salrean rested, unmoving and oblivious to all that had transpired just a few feet away.
“Salrean,” Ethorn’s voice broke as he hunkered down next to her and reached out to touch her cheek. “Please, wake up…”
Rose’s eyes filled with tears. She looked away, unable to watch Ethorn’s grief. Her gaze fixed upon Azil, who sat propped up against the blood-stained wall. He was clutching his wounded stomach. She could see the agony etched in deep-lines on his face. Yet the goblin remained silent; his jaw clenched, his eyes squeezed shut.
“Azil,” Rose pulled herself across the flagstones towards him. “Can you hear me?”
The goblin’s eyes opened, their topaz intensity focusing on the female hobbit who had pulled herself to his side.
“Rose,” his voice was weak, failing. “You must leave, now while you have the chance. More will come. You don’t have much time.”
Rose shook her head, tears trickling down her cheeks. “I don’t want to leave you.”
Azil grimaced. “Foolish hobbit,” he hissed between clenched teeth. “I’ll be dead soon – and so will you if you don’t run now.”
“He’s right,” Ethorn’s voice, tinged with relief, echoed across the chamber. “Salrean’s alive. I’ll carry her. Veldur – carry Rose. I don’t think she can walk.”
“We have to bring Azil!” Rose protested, hysteria looming.
“I’m staying,” Azil gasped, blood bubbling on his thin lips. “I took a blade to my belly, Rose. No one survives that. Go with the rangers.”
“No,” tears blinded Rose but she was too weak to resist as the tall ranger, Veldur, who scooped her into his arms as if she was a child. “We can’t leave you behind.”
Ethorn had picked Salrean up; she hung limply in his arms, her face deathly pale.
“Gonthorn – you lead the way,” Ethorn turned to his rangers. “Nathil – you take rear guard. Peri, take the Red Book and keep it safe. Stay at my side. Let’s go.”
Peri did as he was bid, picking up the Red Book, from where it sat splayed open and splattered with blood. He closed it and slipped it into Rose’s satchel, which he then slung across his front.
Ethorn walked across the chamber, halting next to where Veldur stood with Rose in his arms. For a moment, he paused, looking down at Azil.
“He killed Morwyn,” Rose sobbed. “We can’t leave Azil behind.”
The ranger’s face grew grim at this news. “We cannot take him with us, Rose,” he said softly. “He’s dying.”
“Goodbye, she-hobbit,” Azil gasped. Blood dribbled down his chin as he attempted to smile but managed only a grimace. “I wish I could have served you better.”
Grief seized Rose then. She tried to wriggle out of Veldur’s iron grip, but she was too weak and hurt to manage it.  Ethorn nodded to Azil, in silent thanks. Then, he moved off, following Gonthorn from the chamber, and Veldur followed.
The last glimpse that Rose had of Azil the goblin was of a wiry, stoop-shouldered figure, leaning up against the wall, surrounded by the dead. He raised a thin hand in farewell.
Moments later, he was lost from sight.

The group fled down the stairwell, making no attempt at stealth. Azil had spoken true; they had but a short window before the Witch Tower would be teeming with goblins and hill-men. They could hear their shouts, the thundering of approaching feet. The four rangers and one hobbit raced down the network of ruined corridors towards the secret way out.
“How did you find us?” Peri gasped at Ethorn’s side.
“We tracked Azil and Rose through the Black Woods,” Ethorn replied, barely out of breath, despite that he carried Salrean. “After that, we followed them into the network of tunnels under Carn Dûm. I’d prefer not to retrace our steps, but it’s the only way out of this place.”
Peri never had a chance to ask the ranger why he was reluctant to take the secret way out – for a company of goblins collided with them. They were racing down a set of steps towards the last stretch of corridor before they would descend underground, and met the goblins on the landing below.
The rangers cut their way through the fray. Peri fought at their side, Sting glowing bright in the dimness. The elf-blade terrified many of the goblins who faced it. Some even shrieked in terror and cowered. With the last of the goblins dealt with, the party raced the last distance to the narrow stairwell that led deep beneath Carn Dûm.
Huddled in Veldur’s arms, Rose drifted in and out of consciousness. Every jolt of his stride caused her chest to spasm in agony. Her limbs were dead weights; they felt as if they did not belong to her.  
As they descended the narrow, mossy steps into the dark depths, alarm made her stir from the oblivion that beckoned to her.
“Ethorn,” she croaked. “The gallery under Carn Dûm. It’s not safe. There’s a…”
“We know,” Ethorn replied quickly. “We met the wight on the way up. If there was another way out of here I would take it.”
“Wight?” Peri did not bother to hide his alarm. Those creatures, often mentioned in stories told by the fireside on long winter nights in the Shire, struck fear into the hearts of most hobbits. “There’s one here?”
“There certainly is,” Veldur spoke for the first time, his voice a deep rumble in the cramped stairwell. “Not a creature I ever hoped to meet again.”
“It hates Sting,” Rose replied, her voice trembling with the effort it took to speak. “Use the sword against it!”
A short while later, the company entered the dark gallery. Gonthorn lit a torch and carried it aloft as they padded between the towering columns, each trying to make their tread as light as possible.
It made no difference. Half-way down the gallery, the ghoul sensed their presence. The same strange wind that Rose had felt when entering this gallery earlier, gusted towards them, ruffling their hair and causing their cloaks to billow behind them. The chill of the breeze on Rose’s cheeks roused her slightly. She tightened her grip around Veldur’s neck, fear twisting her belly.
Only Peri did not know what was coming.
The wight, its tattered clothing fluttering around long, emaciated limbs, loomed before them, appearing like a wraith from behind one of the columns. It rushed at them, a scream issuing from its gaping maw.
“Intruders – I will have you all!”
Peri staggered back, Sting trembling before him.
The Wight was injured. Rose could see the dark gash on its left forearm, where she had sliced it deeply with Sting’s blade. It also limped painfully; a result, no doubt, of its encounter with the rangers.
Ethorn and Veldur hung back, unable to draw their weapons, while Gonthorn, Nathil and Peri moved forward to meet the wight.
“Peri,” Ethorn commanded, “step forward and show it Sting.”
The hobbit’s face was pale and strained in the flickering torchlight, but he did as he was told.
“Get back!” he yelled. The force in his voice surprised Rose – you would have never known he was terrified. “Foul ghoul – remember this? Do you want to feel its bite once more?”
The wight drew back; its ravaged face tilting to one side, its gaze narrowing. “The elf-blade,” it hissed.
“This is ‘Sting’,” Peri replied, advancing. The wight loped backwards, cringing before the blade that had wounded it earlier.
“Keep that foul blade from me!” it shrieked.
“Let us pass,” Peri commanded.  He continued to take steps towards the wight, as behind him, Ethorn and Veldur moved past. Gonthorn and Nathil flanked Peri, their weapons raised.
“No!” the wight wailed. There was something wrenching in that sound; the cry of a creature that had been doomed to spend its days in the lonely darkness. The despair in its wail chilled all that heard it.
Peri inched back down the gallery. He had his back to where Ethorn and Veldur were moving swiftly towards the archway that marked the end of the wight’s domain; yet he dared not run. 
Even the terror of the elf-blade could not contain the wight’s desperation. Unable to bear the thought of them escaping, once more, the ghoul lunged at the hobbit.
 Peri swung Sting, clenching his jaw as the blade bit flesh.
A blood-curdling scream echoed down the gallery. The wight staggered backwards, grasping the bleeding stump of its right wrist. Its clawed hand lay twitching at its feet.
Taking his chance, for he knew that another would not present itself, Peri turned and sprinted away. The two rangers at his side quickly outdistanced him, covering the ground easily in long strides. Peri ran faster than he ever had, his short legs flying. He dove under the arch, the wight’s terrible cries still echoing in his ears.
It was a long while, before they could no longer hear the wailing.
The party travelled deep into the earth, and eventually arrived at the underground lake. Still on edge after their encounter with the wight, Peri found the cavern unnerving. There was a watchful presence here; one that none of them wanted to disturb. The party skirted the edge, keeping clear of the gently rippling water.
There were a number of entrances to tunnels along the lake’s edge, but they took the one that Rose had marked with her scarf.
Peri was the last to enter the tunnel. Before doing so, he stooped and retrieved the scarf. He knew that, once she had recovered, Rose would be happy to have it back.


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Night settled over the Black Woods, bringing a chill, overcast day to a close.
In the heart of the bleak forest, far from the prying eyes of hill-men and goblins, and far from the obsidian towers of Carn Dûm, the party of rangers and hobbits made camp for the night.
The party camped in a hollow, and lit a small fire. Their evening meal was frugal, for the rangers had not had time to hunt; their entire focus had been to put as much distance between them and Carn Dûm as possible.
Ethorn laid Salrean down on his cloak, next to where Rose slept deeply. The hobbit had lost consciousness soon after they had run from the wight. She had not woken since; her breathing was shallow, her skin a sickly shade. However, Ethorn had promised Peri that she would live.
The four rangers and hobbit were sharing a meal of dried beef and mushrooms when Salrean awoke.
Her soft groan alerted them. Ethorn moved over to her; kneeling next to Salrean as her eyes flickered open. Her gaze, unfocused at first, eventually fixed upon him.
“Ethorn,” she whispered. “What are you doing here?”
“Saving you,” he gave a wry smile before reaching out and stroking her cheek. “Do you think I would have let you leave Farnost if I hadn’t planned to follow you?”
Salrean’s eyes glittered as she stared up at him, then her expression clouded. “Morwyn…”
“She’s dead,” Peri shuffled up next to Ethorn. “Azil killed her.”
“Unfortunately, the Goblin King escaped, but I injured him badly,” Ethorn added. “He won’t be causing trouble for a while.”
Salrean’s eyes widened at this news. “The Witch of Angmar is dead,” she whispered, as if saying the words out loud made them truth. “Then the quest did not fail.”
“No,” Ethorn replied, his smile fading. “Although things did not turn out the way you’d hoped.”
“Where’s Rose?” Salrean asked suddenly, her gaze flicking over the faces of the four men and one male hobbit who stared down at her.
“Next to you,” Peri replied. “Morwyn injured her too.”
Salrean rolled over onto her back with a soft groan.
“I feel as if I’ve been beaten,” she gasped.
Salrean looked over at where the small, female hobbit lay next to her, sleeping soundly.
“She looks so young,” Salrean observed softly. “Yet, I’ve never met anyone braver.”
“Azil escorted her to the secret way in,” Peri explained, “but he betrayed her once they were inside. Morwyn was sure that the Red Book held a secret. She was about to kill Rose for not giving it to her when Azil stepped in and killed the witch.”
Salrean shook her head, incredulous. Her gaze then returned to Rose.
“I misjudged Azil,” she whispered. “Sometimes, there is goodness in those we believe to be incapable of it. Where is he now?”
Silence followed her words, but the expression on Peri’s face told her all.
“Targkok stabbed him. He was alive when we left the Witch Tower. He won’t be now…”
Peri’s voice trailed away, only to be replaced by silence. The gazes of all present rested Rose’s sleeping face.
It was done. They had slain the Witch of Angmar and retrieved the Red Book. The death of Rose’s father had been avenged. Morwyn would never march her armies south and bring a reign of terror to the free peoples of Middle Earth. Yet, victory had left a bitter taste in their mouths.
All of them had expected to feel happier than they did.

Rose’s eyes flickered open, her gaze shifting over the faces of her companions.
Crouched at her side, Peri could see Rose’s exhaustion, pain and sadness. He longed to reached out and hug her. However, he was not sure of the extent of her injuries and did not want to damage her.
“Is it over?” she asked, her voice trembling with fatigue. “Have we escaped?”
“Yes,” Peri reached out and took her hand in his. “Carn Dûm is behind us. Gentler lands lie ahead.”
“Good,” Rose gently squeezed his hand and managed a tremulous smile. “I’ve had enough of adventures for now. I think I’m quite happy to spend the rest of my life back in the Shire, doing everyday things.”
Peri gave a soft laugh at that.
He could not agree more. The gentle green hills of Hobbiton, with its neatly tended fields and good-natured hobbit faces would be very welcome indeed. He would carry the Red Book back to the Shire, and one day Rose might write their story in its pages. For now their adventure was at an end, and not a moment too soon.
“Good idea, Rose,” he replied. “Let’s go home.”



The End.

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Sadly, this installment marks the end of the my tribute to Tolkien: THE WITCH OF ANGMAR.  I embarked upon this adventure around a year ago - and over 40,000 words later - this Lord of the Rings Fan Fiction tale, has concluded. Those of you who have been following since the first installment - thank you for your support! :-)

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