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Friday, 11 October 2013

LOTR Fan Fiction: The Witch of Angmar - Part #9





The Witch of Angmar

Legacy of the Fellowship

Part Nine

Ethorn

                                                                                                                        
A
shadow moved amongst the trees – tall and threatening.
Rose’s heart leapt at the sight of it. Fumbling for Sting, she skidded to a halt, causing Peri to collide with her. He opened his mouth to protest but Rose swivelled round and placed a finger to her lips – silencing him.
Ahead, Salrean had also halted. She drew her sword, her gaze scanning the dense woodland that rose either side of the narrow forest path and formed a canopy above their heads. They were less than a day’s travel from Farnost – and their journey had been blessedly uneventful.
Until now.
Leaves rustled and branches shifted. Then, a dark shape stepped out from the dense foliage.
It was a man, shrouded in a travel-stained, dark cape. The cloak snagged on a branch and parted slightly, revealing a thick leather vest underneath. Rose recognised the clothing instantly, for it was the same as Salrean’s.
The shadow that had given her such a fright was a ranger.
“Ethorn!” Salrean re-sheathed her sword with relief. Then, her face broke into a warm smile. “Must you sneak up on folk like that? I was about to run you through.”
The man, tall and long-limbed with shaggy dark hair framing a swarthy face, grinned.  He had the look of a man who passed most of his life outdoors; his teeth were white against his tanned skin.
“Is that any welcome for your future husband?” his gaze settled upon Salrean’s face, eyes twinkling. His grin widened when she blushed.
“Idiot. I’m not marrying anyone, least of all you.”
The newcomer laughed, before he shifted his attention to Salrean’s two companions. As his gaze settled upon them, his good humour faded.
“You did it then? Your father will be pleased.”
There was no mistaking the sarcasm in his voice. Like Barandur, this man appeared to hold little love for Rendur of Farnost. Rose’s trepidation at meeting Salrean’s father increased. Did anyone, besides his daughter, hold a good opinion of the Chieftain of Farnost?
Salrean shook her head. “I wasn’t entirely successful. I brought Rose Fairbairn and Pericles Took back with me – they are the descendants of Samwise Gamgee and Peregrin Took – but one of Morwyn’s servants reached the Red Book before I could make it safe. He killed Rose’s father and stole it.”
Ethorn’s penetrating gaze rested upon Rose.
“I am sorry to hear that,” he murmured. “This is ill news indeed. I am sorry for your loss Rose.”
Rose nodded back. Despite that they had only just met, she appreciated his words.
Ethorn then glanced at Salrean once more. “I’ve been looking for you for the past few days. This forest is now crawling with goblins. You must have encountered some?”
“We were attacked a few days out from the Shire,” Salrean replied, “but since Annúminas, we have seen no one.”
“Then you have been lucky,” Ethorn replied, his handsome face grim. “I killed four this morning. They grow bold. We have moved all the folk on the outskirts of Farnost within the city walls. Every evening, after sunset, goblins crawl from the woods and attack. We must hurry if we are to make it home by dusk. We cannot remain out here after dark.”
Rose felt her heart flutter against her ribs at Ethorn’s words. She was glad he had found them, for otherwise they would have continued, unwary, into danger. Yet, this news meant that the situation, here in the north, was worse than she had thought. It appeared that the Witch of Angmar’s influence had made the goblins ever bolder. They would seek to destroy what villages they could and strike fear into the hearts of men – making it easy for Morwyn to sweep south.
“Very well,” Salrean nodded, her face mirroring Ethorn’s. “Let’s move on.”

They picked up their pace, moving at slow jog along the forest path. Rose and Peri were a lot fitter now than at the beginning of their journey – but even so, they struggled to keep up with the rangers’ long strides. Salrean and Ethorn ran on a few yards ahead, hardly seeming to tire.
On and on they ran, and by mid-afternoon, the forest had grown sparser, with stretches of meadow in-between copses of woodland. This far north, autumn had already made its presence felt, for many of the leaves were turning gold and the air had a bite to it.
Eventually, they took a short rest in the middle of a wide clearing, where they found the remnants of a campsite. Whoever had camped here, had left the area in a mess. They had hacked at nearby trees for firewood and left piles of filth and food scraps scattered around the ashes of their campsite.
“Goblins,” Ethorn’s face tightened with distaste before he knelt down and examined the ashes. “I’d say they’re the ones I met this morning while searching for you. At least those goblins won’t be bothering us.”
“I hope it was them,” Rose replied, glancing around the clearing nervously, half-expecting goblins to burst out of the trees at any moment.
“Rose has a sword that warns you when goblins approach,” Salrean straightened up after scanning the clearing. “It glows blue. Rose, show him Sting – let’s see if any goblins are around.”
Rose slowly drew Sting free of its scabbard. The elvish blade glowed silver in the afternoon light, without a trace of blue. She let out the breath she had been holding. They were safe for the moment, at least.
“‘Tis a beautiful blade,” Ethorn stepped forward, his gaze tracing the elvish inscription, “and a perfect size for a hobbit. Pay close attention to it as we approach Farnost, for a little prior warning could very well save our lives.”
Rose nodded and re-sheathed the sword.

They continued their journey north-east, at a run. The rangers had picked up the pace slightly but, even so, the light gradually began to fade – and still there was no sign of Farnost rising up above the trees. Rose pushed herself on, her weary feet beginning to stumble on the uneven ground. More than once, Peri grabbed her as she tripped over a tree root, or when her ankle gave way.
“I’m not sure how much longer I can go on,” she gasped. Beside her, Peri’s face was red and coated with sweat.
“Neither am I,” he panted. “I can’t take much more of this.”
Fortunately for the hobbits, a short while later, the trees parted. They followed the two rangers out into a wide expanse of rolling, windswept grassland dotted with low trees. There, in the distance, rose the walls of Farnost.
The city sat at the southern end of the North Downs. Rose could see the shadows of the hills rolling away into the hazy northern horizon. Like Annúminas, Farnost appeared a collection of old and new. Ruined towers sat propped up against more recent ones, and inside the new city wall, Rose caught glimpses of the original crumbling fortifications. The pale stone of the city reflected the red glow of the setting sun to the west, making Farnost appear blood-stained.
Rose felt a pang of sadness at the sight of it. This part of Middle Earth had known much war, devastation and bloodshed – and now dark times had come once more. It seemed so cruel, so unnecessary. No wonder the Dúnedain were such a strong people; they had been forced to withstand so much.
Heartened by the sight of their destination, the travellers, including the two exhausted hobbits, quickened their pace. Rose’s heart pounded in her ears; her breath now coming in ragged bursts that tore at her chest with every breath. Yet, she pushed herself on.
The light had all but faded and Rose could see the people of Farnost had lit their fires; it was a welcoming sight after a long journey. Fortunately, they were on the last stretch and the city beckoned as it drew ever closer.
Then, out of the corner of her eye, Rose glimpsed a flash of blue. She looked down and her throat constricted painfully.
Sting had begun to glow.
Rose was drawing in her breath to shout a warning to her companions, when she caught sight of figures moving towards her, from the east, across the scrubby grassland. Even at this distance, she recognised them instantly, for they did not move like men.
“Make for the gates!” Ethorn shouted. He had also seen them.
The goblins let out hooting cries and scrambled towards the travellers, covering the ground with frightening speed.
Rose struggled to pull Sting free of its scabbard and, in doing so, tripped, nearly impaling herself on the blade.
“Peri!” she screamed. “Help me!”
Peri was already a few yards ahead, not having realising that Rose had fallen. He turned, the whites of his eyes bright in the fading light and sprinted back to her.
The goblins were drawing close now. The hobbits had just moments before they reached them.
“Salrean!” Peri shouted, his voice shrill with fear. “Ethorn!”
Peri heaved Rose to her feet. Trembling, they turned to face the first goblin that bore down upon them. Peri was unarmed; it was up to Rose to defend them.
The sight of the goblin almost caused her legs to collapse under her. She almost dropped Sting at the sight of its bulbous, glistening eyes, the open mouth crowded full of sharp teeth, and the sharp blade clenched in its fist that whistled towards her. She staggered back against Peri, holding Sting out before her. It was a weapon she had no idea how to wield.
The sight of the glowing blue blade pulled the goblin up short. It stopped, just a yard away from where Rose and Peri huddled, its head inclining slightly.
“Elf blade!” it hissed. “Where does a Halfling get one of those?”
Moments later, more goblins crowded up behind their leader, eyes with pinprick pupils glowing in the gathering dusk.
Suddenly, there was a whisper of boots on dry grass, and two cloaked figures leaped over the hobbits, providing a barrier between them and the goblins.
Salrean and Ethorn had come back for them.
“Run!” Ethorn commanded. His voice was flat and hard and he did not glance back at the hobbits. “They are closing the gates. Run and don’t look back!”
Rose and Peri did not need to be told twice. They turned and fled like hares across the last stretch, towards where the shadow of the city walls fell across the grasslands. Behind them, they heard shouts, the clash of steel, and the crunch of bones breaking – but, as instructed, they did not glance back. Rose hoped that the rangers would not be foolish enough to take on all the goblins. She hoped that they would know when to turn and run.
Ahead, the great gates of Farnost loomed; two huge oaken doors, studded with iron spikes. They were slowly drawing closed. Rose gritted her teeth and forced her exhausted legs to sprint the last distance.
She and Peri slid inside, just as the heavy doors boomed shut. They skidded to a halt, and looked up into the surprised faces of the guards inside. Like most of the Dúnedain, these men had never seen a hobbit.
“Wait!” Peri shouted, turning back to the gates. “Salrean and Ethorn are out there. They’re surrounded by goblins and vastly outnumbered. Help them!”
The guard stared at Peri a moment, as if he did not speak their tongue, before they realised that the Halfling was speaking of two of their rangers.
The guard closest to them, a broad-shouldered, heavy-set man dressed in battle-scarred leather armour, exploded into action.
“Open the gates!” he shouted. “Veldur, Gonthorn, Nathil – with me!”
Rose and Peri scrambled back as three tall, well-built men strode out of the shadows. Their faces were frightening and Rose was relieved their fury was not directed at her.
Slowly, the gates drew open, the gears and chains grinding. Then, when there was a gap large enough, the four guards slipped through and disappeared into the darkness.


End of Part #9

Be back for Part #10 on 25 October!

Wednesday, 9 October 2013

Sneak peek at The Citadel of Lies

The final edits and polish are being made to The Citadel of Lies (Book Two of the
Palâdnith Chronicles). The  final stages before publication are an exciting period for an author. The long months of edits are over - the rewrites, exasperation, and even more rewrites, are done. Now its about making the novel shine. For those of you who are patiently waiting - your wait is almost over! In the meantime, I have pasted in the Prologue of The Citadel of Lies into this blog post, to whet your appetite!

If you enjoy the Prologue and would like to read more, but haven't yet read the first book in the series, here's a link to it on Amazon: Journey of Shadows (Book One of the Palâdnith Chronicles) - available in Kindle edition (US$2.99) or in paperback (US$10.44).

As the theme of this book centres of the difference between truth and lies, the tale begins with a quote from the great Marcus Aurelius. 




The

Citadel

of

Lies





Book Two of the Palâdnith Chronicles



Sam J. Charlton




Everything we hear is an opinion, not a fact.

Everything we see is a perspective, not the truth.



Marcus Aurelius






Prologue



The Messenger





  “My Queen, I bring news.”

The voice rasped, breaking the endless silence.

“Obviously, or you wouldn’t be here. Tell me, have my servants succeeded?”

The woman’s gaze slid over the ravaged creature that bowed before her. Like the others, he would serve her till she chose to free him. Although she could not communicate directly with the four she had sent out through the portal, the others here could share their thoughts. They were one entity, the keepers – and now they served only her.

The keeper before her cringed and stepped back from his mistress before replying.

“The brothers still elude their hunters.”

The woman frowned.

“How is that possible?” she enunciated each word carefully, as if speaking to a half-wit. “How have three creatures, bred for one purpose only, failed me?”

“They have not failed you yet mistress. The youngest of the three brothers escaped on horseback. He travelled inland and entered the Valley of the Tors, where the Malwagen took him captive. There, your servant could not reach him. He managed to escape the sprites, and his hunter has now tracked him to Mirfaran. The assassin sent after the weaponsmith travelled to Catedrâl, only to find his quarry three days gone – he now tracks him through the Rocklands towards Tarras. The eldest brother survived two attacks during his journey west, before he met with Floriana DeSanith on the road across the High Dragon Spines. She has given him courage and purpose.”

The messenger’s voice trailed off then, watching as his mistress’s face grew thunderous.

“I gave my own blood to create those creatures,” she hissed, her eyes narrowing into slits, “and they cannot catch three unsuspecting and untrained men!”

“There is still time my Queen! Your servants close in, even as we speak. They will not fail you.”

The woman clenched her fists and waited for her murderous rage to pass.

“They had better not. What news of my fourth servant. Has he found it yet?”

“Not yet my Queen. He searches still, but it has been hidden well.”

“Over two decades in that place and still no closer to retrieving it – I am very disappointed in you all.”

The servant quivered, but wisely kept silent.

The woman waved him away.

“Leave me. I cannot stand the sight of any of you!”

The messenger shuffled back, bowing so low that his knuckles scraped on the damp stone. Relieved to have survived the encounter, the creature stepped onto a rope bridge that creaked under his weight, and hurried away.

Riadamor, Queen of Moden sighed. She suddenly felt old and weary beyond description. She looked about her with disdain. What a foul domain she ruled. Three decades of residence in this wretched prison had not made her accept her fate.

She stood on the stone platform; the very place she and Belythna had awoken on the day of their arrival. It was the portal into Moden but in thirty years there had been no other newcomers – they had been the last.

It had been from this platform that she had sent her four servants forth. After years of experiment and failure, she had discovered that, unlike mortals, the Keepers of Moden could pass through the portal. The keepers she had chosen had not wanted to go, but torture had made them biddable. She had sent the first one out years ago, but had been forced to wait till the brothers’ Sentorân charms no longer protected them before she could send forth the others. It had taken a powerful spell, and much of her own blood, but she had eventually succeeded in transporting her servants out of Moden and into Palâdnith – the world she was desperate to return to.

In reality, the platform on which she stood was the flat top of a rock pillar that rose from the centre of the abyss and anchored a network of rope bridges. It was a solitary island of stone in an empty sea, and five paces from one side to the other.

Riadamor circled the platform, her long silver gown rustling as she strode. With Belythna dealt with – imprisoned in one of the many cells that lined the cavern walls – time stretched out with agonising slowness. Moden held her in stasis. She did not need to eat or sleep; she would never grow old or die. The boredom of her existence had almost broken her but still she fought it.

I will not be defeated, Riadamor vowed, my servants will do my bidding and I will leave this place.

The witch knelt then and placed her hands on the cold stone beneath her feet.

I came into Moden through this stone and I will leave the same way. 


Patience, my fellow epic fantasy adventure lovers - the rest is coming soon!

Tuesday, 8 October 2013

The main characters of the Palâdnith Chronicles: Seth, Eni and Val Falkyn

With the coming launch of  The Citadel of Lies - the second installment in the Palâdnith Chronicles - I thought was the right time to focus a little on the series' main characters: Seth, Eni and Val. 

Character development is the cornerstone of any good book - and the challenge with this series is that I have three main protagonists, who each have to carry equal weight. I enjoyed developing the brothers' characters, and making each one distinct. They ended up being very different, both in personality and in looks, to each other. The only feature they share in common is their eye colour - iron grey. When the series begins, the brothers have not seen each other in a decade, and did not part well. However, a family legacy is about to resurface that will pull their lives back together once more.



Seth Falkyn: The youngest of the three brothers - and many readers' favourite! Dark haired, good-looking and a bit of a shirker initially, Seth starts the series as a bankrupt marshal's Tower Guard. However, it's not long before he is forced to take life much more seriously - especially when he ends up on a run from an assassin...

Defining characteristics:
Charming, likeable, realist
Greatest strength: bravery
Greatest fault: Insecurity



Eni Falkyn: The middle brother - a tall, muscular and a talented weaponsmith. Many readers don't fall in love with Eni initially, as he starts the series as a cold and driven individual. However, once he is sentenced to hang for a crime he did not commit, Eni begins a huge journey of discovery...

Defining characteristics: Driven, strong, aloof
Greatest strength: tenacity
Greatest fault: cynicism




Val Falkyn: The eldest brother - slim, blond and bookish. Val makes the most unlikely hero of the three. He starts the series as a reclusive, shy librarian, who is thrown into an adventure against his will, when his master sends him on a dangerous quest, he's far from prepared for...

Defining characteristics: sensitive, proud, willful
Greatest strength: intelligence 

Greatest fault: lack of self-belief
 
Intrigued? Join the brothers on a journey of discovery, danger and adventure. The first book in the series in available on Amazon (Kindle and paperback editions) and the second installment is due out this month - October 2013!

Journey of Shadows (Book One in the Palâdnith Chronicles) is available on Amazon (Kindle and paperback editions)

The Citadel of Lies (Book Two in the Palâdnith Chronicles) is due out this month (October 2013!). The novel is undergoing its final edit and polish. Watch this space!